Sentence Combining

Cole struggled to shift his position, while stiffness had set into his joints like hardened cement as the ground was uneven.

The ground was uneven as stiffness had set into Cole's joints like hardened cement, while he had struggled to shift his position.

Cole grimaced as he struggled to raise his right knee, but he couldn't.

All of Cole's life he had been haunted with nightmares of being helpless.

Christmas Break

Christmas Day

I went to Midnight Christmas Mass to give my respects to God. I woke up early in the morning and made a Christmas breakfast. Soon after everyone was done eating breakfast we opened presents. The big kids were having fun playing connect four, and made it a competition.

New Years/Eve

I had found out what my baby is so it made my New Year's. We went shopping New Year's Eve to get the food and snacks. I had made platters of sub sandwiches. We really didn't make a dinner it was finger foods. My best friend came over with her boyfriend and spent sometime with us. I went to sleep right after 12:00am.

Correcting Senteces

His daughter asked a question, so it was a difficult moment.
The fog was thick, and it was hard to see.
He felt sick as he got ready to throw the grenade.
He threw the grenade, and it made a sound.
Kiowa gave him some advice, and it didn't help.
He gets upset when he thinks about war.