My Reading Book Called ELLA

Just Ella
The book Ella was about a young girl who was to marry the Prince Charming. Ella thought she was going to fall in love and live happily ever after. Soon after she got the taste of living in the castle, she came to sense that the prince wasn't for her. Everything about the castle didn't bring happiness to the soon to be Princess. Ella found a way to escape after the Prince Charming rejected her inputs about being friends. Ella found the one she was truly longing for, and waited. Just
Ella is a book based on a fairy tale of the book Cinderella. The catch is that Ella is the opposite of Cinderella. I think this book was a very good twist to the story. Theres a lot of things going on in the story. You never really know what Ella was going to do next.

Sentence Correcting

I went down at the pond, and three kids from my school were there.We fell down again and again, and we laughed so much our stomachs hurt.

I though the lopsided game would never end, and the score just kept getting worse.

Martha thinks she is so cool, but she is not cool to me.

Joe watched a video his mom had bought for him at the store where she works.

Susan loved to watch football, and watched it every Sunday on T.V. Every Saturday she would go to the local college football game. She would always wear the school colors.

Alaska

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alaska

Alaska is the largest state of United States of America by area. Alaska is located in the Northwest region of North America. It is the 47th state in America. Alaska is one of the two states not connected to any other state of the U.S.

Sentence Combining

The flames sucked at the air, and rumbled like a freight train as the shelter burned.

The shelter burned while the flames sucked the air, and rumbled like a freight train.

It rumbled like a freight train as the flames sucked the air, while the shelter burned.

My Thoughts

The thoughts running through my mind at this moment are the holidays. I can't wait till Christmas comes. Christmas is one of my favorite holidays. Its the whole good vibe i get around this time of year. Then soon after Christmas is New Years. Its better to set goals to make this year better than then the last one. Everyone has a New Years resolution.

Embarrassing Moments

Pimple Incident At School

My most embarrassing moment had to be when I was in the 5Th grade. I had never had a pimple before in my life. I knew I had to go to school it wasn't an option. I remember doing the same routine as any other day. Except that as I was covering my face with one hand everywhere I went. I had thought covering it no one would notice. Well I had thought wrong. It wasn't really like me to cover my face the whole day. So then one of my friends had asked me, "what was wrong". I had told them why Ive been covering my face that whole time. They thought it was silly of me to act like that. But in my mind it wasn't silly. That big red spot on my face that wasn't suppose to be there. Finally I said forget it, if my friends really don't care then i shouldn't neither.Later in the years I got bad acne but this time I was older. I was aloud to use make up .Cover up works pretty darn good. It gets the job done.

Editting Sentences

Chris's stomached hurt because he had eaten to much candy.
Anna needed milk, so she had went walking to the store.
Because Richard was so tired he bought an energy drink.
Telsa woke up late, so then she had to catch up with the bus.
I have to wake up early, so I can walk to school.
I go to school in the morning, and eat breakfast because I'm hungry.
School started, so I needed to start on my work.
I have to do the work, because the Teacher assigns it.

Sentence Combining

Janet was the directer of the band and she also played the drums.

Anthony and Jake are both fine writers.

She had just finished the book War and Peace Maria is a fast reader.

She is a whiz at math, and she has a calculator in her hand.


CREATIVE PARAGRAPH

I have four teenagers around the ages seventeen trough twenty. My oldest daughter Janet is a directer of a choir band. Her favorite instrument to play is the drums. My second oldest are my twins Anthony and Jake. They both are extremely fine writers, and they have recently just published thier own books . My youngest daughter Maria is a book freak. She had read the book War and Peace about ten times in the Summer. She is a very fast pace reader and is also very good in Mathmatics its her speacialty.

Holiday Weekend

On Thanksgiving we all helped prepare the food. My family is big so we had two turkeys and ham. We all got together later on in the evening and we had supper. I think the dogs were happy they also had got their own plate for Thanksgiving. The night before my dad rented movies, so we all watched the movie Fred Claus.