Sentence Combining

Cole struggled to shift his position, while stiffness had set into his joints like hardened cement as the ground was uneven.

The ground was uneven as stiffness had set into Cole's joints like hardened cement, while he had struggled to shift his position.

Cole grimaced as he struggled to raise his right knee, but he couldn't.

All of Cole's life he had been haunted with nightmares of being helpless.

Christmas Break

Christmas Day

I went to Midnight Christmas Mass to give my respects to God. I woke up early in the morning and made a Christmas breakfast. Soon after everyone was done eating breakfast we opened presents. The big kids were having fun playing connect four, and made it a competition.

New Years/Eve

I had found out what my baby is so it made my New Year's. We went shopping New Year's Eve to get the food and snacks. I had made platters of sub sandwiches. We really didn't make a dinner it was finger foods. My best friend came over with her boyfriend and spent sometime with us. I went to sleep right after 12:00am.

Correcting Senteces

His daughter asked a question, so it was a difficult moment.
The fog was thick, and it was hard to see.
He felt sick as he got ready to throw the grenade.
He threw the grenade, and it made a sound.
Kiowa gave him some advice, and it didn't help.
He gets upset when he thinks about war.

My Reading Book Called ELLA

Just Ella
The book Ella was about a young girl who was to marry the Prince Charming. Ella thought she was going to fall in love and live happily ever after. Soon after she got the taste of living in the castle, she came to sense that the prince wasn't for her. Everything about the castle didn't bring happiness to the soon to be Princess. Ella found a way to escape after the Prince Charming rejected her inputs about being friends. Ella found the one she was truly longing for, and waited. Just
Ella is a book based on a fairy tale of the book Cinderella. The catch is that Ella is the opposite of Cinderella. I think this book was a very good twist to the story. Theres a lot of things going on in the story. You never really know what Ella was going to do next.

Sentence Correcting

I went down at the pond, and three kids from my school were there.We fell down again and again, and we laughed so much our stomachs hurt.

I though the lopsided game would never end, and the score just kept getting worse.

Martha thinks she is so cool, but she is not cool to me.

Joe watched a video his mom had bought for him at the store where she works.

Susan loved to watch football, and watched it every Sunday on T.V. Every Saturday she would go to the local college football game. She would always wear the school colors.

Alaska

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Alaska

Alaska is the largest state of United States of America by area. Alaska is located in the Northwest region of North America. It is the 47th state in America. Alaska is one of the two states not connected to any other state of the U.S.

Sentence Combining

The flames sucked at the air, and rumbled like a freight train as the shelter burned.

The shelter burned while the flames sucked the air, and rumbled like a freight train.

It rumbled like a freight train as the flames sucked the air, while the shelter burned.